Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss both side.
we have an accelerated growth rate and are growing in all spheres be it economic, political or social. While this growth might be good for the world we are destroying everything in our way to achieve it. The world is upsurging with a lot of problems and the biggest among them is the destruction of natural resources. In this essay, we discuss the problem and the solution to overcoming it in detail.
The major cause of the destruction of natural resources is the pollution caused by us. there are many sources of pollution which are leading to destruction and extinction of resources. The dominant one among them is the pollution caused by industries. They are not only annihilating the ecology but also are making people suffer from a range of diseases.
we are using the deficient natural resources at such a progressive rate that there will be no resources left for the future generations to come. we can’t reproduce the natural resources so the only step we can take is to save them as much as we can. we have to use the steps which are accessible and practical rather than going for the complicated ones.
The government has to introduce some compelling rules and regulations to avoid wastage of resources and bring out some eco-friendly measures. The international organizations can raise funds and also acquaint people be introducing an awareness program to educate people the importance of natural resources and a guide to save them.
To conclude, this is a major concern as it serves as roots for other concerning issues for the world but it can be alleviated if it is attended with an appropriate approach and dealt with global integrity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90812720848 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88686740624 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533568904594 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0713615652 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2142857143 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797170422396 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280617894858 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024236098248 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422797846811 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104566843954 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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