Education is an essential tool for developing country. Some people believe that, teachers have significant character to play in academic success. On the other hand, some people think that, the students have knowledge to learn about education. I will discuss both views with revelant example.
At begin with, teachers and trainers both have tremendous amount of knowledge and skills regarding different kind of subjects. Even they do improve their skills or ideas with the help of training. So, they have very positive influence and techniques to reform students mind. I personally beleive that, school is the first institutions to help the students in their personal life instead private life. In Pakistan, the schooling system has completely changed if we compared it in to the past year. O-levels and A- levels have placed their valued in society, just because of good teachers and mentors. They guides and support to students with the effective manners. So, in my opines, without teachers good education system is not possible.
On the other hand, if, we talk about students attitude. So, I beleive that, their attitude is depending on very rare cases. For example, when students has power pack. They are more efficient about the all kind of subjects. Even they have extra ordinary God gifted sense of humor. Moreover, they doesnot required any teacher or institutions for practice. For example, In ICMAP Karachi, has a student who recently qualified the CMA degree without any help of institute. So, according to my point of view we doesn't dependent on particular example. Teacher is the best source of knowledge. They enhanced students skills in every aspect of life.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, teacher is the best way to help out in study. We cannot deny this statement.
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- Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own reason. 61
- Many people say that we now live in ‘consumer societies’ where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that consumer culture has played a vital role in improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08080808081 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5751435196 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8703699561 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.875 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.375 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229497782971 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622400564935 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676906612583 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152355939316 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129843828173 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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