You recently met a couple who will be visiting your town. Write a letter to them and say
– Suggest what to bring
– Recommend where they should stay
- What places they should visit
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
Hope you are doing good. I was just going through the photos of our Dubai trip last month and all the fun memories came back. I am really excited for your visit to my home town Mumbai next week and hope we will have the same enjoyable days again.
As it is your first time in the Mumbai city, I would recommend some travel necessities to carry along with you. Firstly, make sure you put a SPF-50 sunscreen lotion with you as it is really hot over here during the daytime. Although, the rains have not yet started but it would be helpful to have an umbrella. Do not worry if you are not able to bring it, I lend you mine. Since I could not apply for more than three days leave, I would like to suggest some places that you can look around for the rest of the days. The most famous tourist attraction is the gateway of India near the Churchgate station. It is a great location with good view and you can reach there easily by local trains. Another fascinating beauty to see is the Worli sea face. It is famous for its mesmerizing sunset view and calmness. Do plan it in the evening if you decide to visit this place.
You need not worry about your stay as I would be more than happy to host you guys at my place. I eagerly await your arrival to my City.
With Love,
Khyati
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ng with you. Firstly, make sure you put a SPF-50 sunscreen lotion with you as it ...
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Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t your arrival to my City. With Love, Khyati
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18650793651 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99521899575 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8097371099 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9375 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160698686428 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477695866057 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469471707564 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845244529791 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511632568251 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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