In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and health and fitness are decreasing.
What are the causes and what measures are to be taken to control it?
Obesity is one of the alarming issues in the current era of life. The biggest problem in a few countries was found to be the growing average weight of the population along with declining levels of well-being and fitness. This essay will discuss the possible causes of over-weight and relevant solutions to solve it.
The factors contributing to the increase in the number of kilograms weighed on an average in most of the people are eating unhealthy and leading a sedentary lifestyle. While it was found that much-working youth prefer to eat junk food with more carbohydrates and less vitamin and fiber sources ultimately leading to gain in weight. For instance, working women tend to be lazy to cook and opting for online food ordering services which is a major driving force to eat junk. Present professional organizations mainly run by computers which require work to be done seated all day long making life motionless. For example, the modern men start his day on his bed and proceed to washroom followed by a drive to the office and again back to home and sleep, where if we observe there is absolutely no activity in the life which in turn leads to overweight problems. Therefore, the important issues that are considered to be the causes of weight gain in many countries are leading a sedentary lifestyle and having unhealthy foods in their diet.
What can the government do to avoid these problems? The government has to implement certain measures in order to prevent this burning problem like asking the companies to pass a rule to encourage the employees to use bicycles as a means of transport and conducting awareness camps to the people about the health and fitness issues that would come due to the over-weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87796610169 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70894758391 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8894640159 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.818181818 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188348230222 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623066153568 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444102656519 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12142268386 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257824389831 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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