Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents are the best teachers.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
İt is believed that parents have so important role in most communities and their first task is growing a good child for better future and they want their children to be a copy as like them as they want to be first teacher for them. İn my opinion, children have learnt everything from their parents about their life and they know their parents to support them all parts their life and they need to feel their parents near them.
To begin with, children think something about their parents that is trustworthy and perfect people for them therefore they can see acting as role model for their children. Moreover, they want to be like their parents when they grow up in the future which is so proudly issue for all parents. For instance, I love my father and he passed away when I was 10 years old, it was so bad situation for me but ı know everything about him and ı took him as a role model even though I do not have father after this term so I can feel him to be close me.
however, parents might make some mistakes in their life and then their children can see these mistakes so they can direct to wrong way. therefore, they can lose themselves and they can not find true model for living their life. Hence, they can care about their behaviors while they are growing up their children.
To sum up, children have to care about behaviour of their parents however they need to accept their parents as a first teacher so that it can be more easy for everybody. İt can be better than in their future life and experts produce some solutions for helping them and they consider this solutions to grow up their children and then they can be good teachers for better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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İt is believed that parents have so impo...
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...eed to feel their parents near them. To begin with, children think something ...
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... a role model even though I do not have father after this term so I can feel him to be...
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...rm so I can feel him to be close me. however, parents might make some mistake...
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...stakes so they can direct to wrong way. therefore, they can lose themselves and they can ...
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... they are growing up their children. To sum up, children have to care about b...
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...ions for helping them and they consider this solutions to grow up their children and...
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...can be good teachers for better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43365695793 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12233592015 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446601941748 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8471512478 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0522101816216 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031650261872 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0169834911512 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414546263907 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172328196542 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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