Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?
It is generally believed that wealth and fame are for sure two most desirable things which are wanted to be gotten by everyone. Many people squander their whole life to reach popularity, but they find that their efforts going in vain, while a few are lucky enough to get fame, even at their very early years. From my point of view, however, is really beneficial to become famous in young age.
To start with, there are several factors in making someone famous, and they are varied. As it is clear that the most essential motive would be a family background. A son or a daughter of the celebrity, for instance, will certainly enjoy being well-known since their childhood, in spite of the fact that they have not done something unique. I validate it as a positive,in other words, a young offspring will be used to be under the limelight from his or her juvenile age, and as a result, it offers great opportunities to reach a perfect future life.
Furthermore, hard-working along with innovation would be another practical ways in this regard. A young student strives inventing something or discovering new ideas despite the interference that hinders his/her productivity would certainly have better chances of becoming well-known personality in the near future. Take an example of the owner of Facebook, he was also a student like many people at university, and devoted his time and effort on creating as well as introducing something new: social networking system. Finally, his struggle paid him off and today, who does not know him?
From the points mentioned above becoming renowned at younger age is for sure practical and offers immense amount of confidence and chance to develop further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, in other words, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68814984413 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656140350877 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5127406107 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172583224543 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554793432559 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558284038133 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102753917561 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543415903547 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.