Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent out to contact them. Others think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The age old debate of contacting an alien life has separated the scientific community. Many believe that intelligent races live across the universe and we should send them a signal about our existence, while others have opposite view and feel this will put the human race in jeopardy. In this essay, both aspects of this argument will be looked upon in detail along with my opinion of not making a quick effort to meet the life forms outside our planet.
Space researchers positively anticipate the existence lives other than the Earth as the universe is filled with billions of stars and theoretical evidences and calculations prove of hypothesis. However, this can be assured only if we can communicate even with one species out of many. This can bring us the chance to learn and know about other races and maybe we can overcome our dire issues of hunger, poverty, global warming and increasing population.
Although, contacting the aliens is not as safe as it sounds, this step can wipe out the whole human race along with other life forms on our planet, and this is what worries other people in scientific community. It cannot be denied that intelligent space race will reject our friendship and other danger is that they make attack us for resources available on Earth, millions of consequences can be guessed. It is will be a great risk to contact outsiders in hope of friendship and then facing unavoidable ramifications.
In conclusion, sending a message to smart species living on the other planets can help us solving out serious issues and change the fate of humanity, but this comes with a risk of being encountered by intelligent enemies which can wipe us off from the face of earth. So after looking into both sides of argument, I believe that human race should not contact the intelligent species immediately but with caution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...living on the other planets can help us solving out serious issues and change the fate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90127388535 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63643684185 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2177576584 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.909090909 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227010905507 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935496572354 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392787944293 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154590496169 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496872924589 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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