You are working overseas in an international company. You traveled back to your home country without informing your office friends. Write a apology letter to these friends.
Apologies to your friend.
Explain the situation
What you enjoyed most working with them
Dear Jeff,
Hope you are doing well. I deeply regret that I had to rush back to my home without informing you on my last working day in Germany. Please accept my sorry for not intimating you on my travel, as it were not only planned at the peak moment but also you were on leave on that day.
As my work visa got expired by last Saturday I need to travel back to India on the same day for its renewal. I was desperately wanted to reach you, but my itinerary was rescheduled earlier. Therefore, I had to catch the domestic flight as early as possible to reach the capital city for departure to my country. I messed with my packing and got over-charged at boarding point.
Anyway, that last two years working with you people changed my mind-set about Germans, I enjoyed the stay at your country and companionship of you. I am so lucky to have you as my friend. I truly enjoyed the team work and meetings with the team which helped me to build my confidence and subject knowledge. As a token of love and care, I left a souvenir with Jacob for you, i think you will like it.
Please be in touch. Hope to see you soon.
Yours lovingly
Harish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., I left a souvenir with Jacob for you, i think you will like it. Please be in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, so, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28110599078 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36995428265 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7740358435 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3571428571 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271625545791 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101148626202 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692598032301 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15968122717 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836552960648 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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