You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?
regulating law is mandatory for establishing democratic government and has a huge impact on human behaviour. However, some people believe that human nature is not influenced by legit laws. I tend to substantiate my argument and I will elaborate my view point with examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, different countries have their own governing body and laws. these regulations have a strong link with a development of particular society or country. To cite an example, in developed countries like Australia and America, stringent legislation is established in accordance to maintain proper clean and green environment. If an individual is found guilty of abolishing these rules, legal action is taken against them. Hence, laws greatly affect human nature.
Probing further, laws have created a boundary in the minds of the people. They have constant fear of rule and regulations and the result of their actions. For example, in Saudi Arabia, death penalty is allotted to the individuals indulged in crime scene like rape and gang robbery. This creates a sense of fear in the minds of the individuals which halt them to take such immense negative step in their life.
In conclusion, it is cleared that laws greatly have a strong influence in reshaping the behaviour of individuals, halting them to indulge in crime and offense.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regulating
regulating law is mandatory for establishing democ...
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Suggestion: These
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21559633028 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88095672019 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7792701639 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4615384615 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0309178458752 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0104835607674 0.0925447433944 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0133694390118 0.071462118173 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0174144627224 0.151781067708 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124894002936 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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