You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighborhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to Mr Koto, the manager. In your letter explain who you are, describe the problem exactly and make suggestions to improve the gym.
Dear Mr Koto, I am Shivesh one of the member of Anytime Fitness Gym. I have always been an exercise enthusiastic and love to try different exercise every now and then. Recently, I have noticed couple of issues with the other gym members behaviour where I would like to bring your attention.
Anytime Fitness gym has always been packed with fitness lovers and I really enjoy the energy around me. One of the problem which I face is that if people are using any machines they don’t clean it after its usage, they leave their sweaty impression on machines. Another problem which I personally hate is in the change room people are behaving so careless that they just leave their used towel on the bench. It is unhygienic and leave bad impression of your gym.
Upon my interest to continue at this gym itself, I request you to kindly spread the awareness for cleanliness in gym so that hygiene can be maintained. Hope this letter finds you well and I look forward to the better change.
Thank you, Shivesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...stic and love to try different exercise every now and then. Recently, I have noticed couple of iss...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding energy'?
Suggestion: the surrounding energy
... with fitness lovers and I really enjoy the energy around me. One of the problem which I face is tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64804469274 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39743576798 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2832925605 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311852074442 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108245811546 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345680664399 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176293799214 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030589384218 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.