Some countries spend a lot of money to make bucycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best soulution to traffic congestion?
Some countries invest a great measure of financial resources in making bicycle usage more accessible. The main aim of this investment is to reduce the use of private cars in order to prevent air pollution and traffic. However, I believe that there are more effective ways to tackle traffic density and the best way is by improving public transportation.
The amount of private cars' owners has been increasing dramatically over the past years. More cars results in higher pollution levels and terrible traffic. As a result, governments are making a tremendous efforts to reduce vehicles usage, including the improvement of bicycle roads. For example, Tel Aviv is one of the most crowded cities in Israel. The city council has motivated the public to use bicycles by building adequate infrastructures as well as spreading public bicycles stands all around the city. Due to these efforts many people have started to use bicycles as their main mean of transport inside the city.
However, bicycles can not replace engine vehicles completely since they are not suitable for long distance travels and they are also significantly slower. Therefore, even if we had the ultimate conditions for bicycle use, many people would still prefer their cars. The only way to fight traffic congestion is by improving public transportation. For example, I work in Tel Aviv but live outside the city. I can not use bicycle for such a long ride but I would use the bus or train if they were more reliable and efficient.
In conclusion, in order to motivate people to reduce their use of private cars, governments spend a lot of money to improve bicycle accessibility. From my perspective, the best way to decrease traffics is by invest in making public transportation more reliable and fast.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effort'?
Suggestion: effort
...lt, governments are making a tremendous efforts to reduce vehicles usage, including the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05102040816 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84937598357 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544217687075 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5163250368 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12940719563 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445462195061 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518560449534 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992112537278 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762353524635 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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