More and more people are having children in later years.What are the reasons for this? Does the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
These days masses prefer to have offsprings in older age. In other words, individuals delay in starting there family. Their are numerous factors which is leading to this changing trend. I believe that it is the positive change, as it will be definitely lead to the development to both individuals and nation.
The predominant reasons for choosing to plan a child in later stage of life are increase in the cost of living and focus on career growth. Price of basic commodities is mushrooming a great speed in the recent time. Considering the expenses involved in nurturing the children, people opt to wait till they have sufficient savings. For example, even the fee of primary education is touching the sky, to afford this expenses educational institutes people often think to have surplus money before having a child. Moreover, youngsters want to have well settled career and are highly conscious to climb the career ladders in early age of life. They are extremely devoted to their jobs or business, and because they do not focus to have a child in early years. Hence, increased in basic expenses and devotion to professional growth causes to have a wards in later years.
This approach to plan family later, will have positive impacting many various way .Primarily, after attaining the maturity, one can become a more responsible and successful originators. Parents will have more experience of life, and they must posses the qualities which are gained with experience, ultimately they will provide good values to the child. , population of many countries is growing immensely, due to which citizens are lacking from basic amenities. If people opt to have offspring in older age, they will definitely have fewer wards and population of the nation can be controlled to some extend. Therefore it will be beneficial for both citizens and over all country.
In conclusion, undoubtedly having children in late age has myriads of advantages, it is therefore opted by many people. This trend will gift the world with well nurtured and disciplined generation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10059171598 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72979166149 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9850002811 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24188449705 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662894454455 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498011715633 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130146113207 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506369574584 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.