Obesity is a raising problem for the children living in economical developed nations. The main cause of the issue is due to increased number of fast food outlets, lack of parent attention which results in offspring poor eating habits and extreme health issues. This essay will highlight the possible reasons and then the consequences of the overweight problems.
One of the reason that people think is the cause of the problem is the exponential growing number of fast food restaurants in developed countries. Fast foods originally were the places where to eat meal few times, but nowadays it become easiest and cheapest solution to have meal on daily basis all around the world. For example, in 2019 it was reported in the Times that 70% of young children consume fast food on average compared to the year 2018. Another reason everyone believe that parents don’t supervise their children eating habits properly causing the overweight problems. Due to the busy work schedule, parents don’t have meal with their children or neither take responsibility to look after their offspring diet habits. Therefore, the children were misguided and attracted to eat junk food more frequently which create overweight problems.
First of all, the main consequence of the unhealthy food habit provokes serious health issue. Fast food contains large number of calories, high saturated fat which people cannot burn it easily. This means the problem does not only create the overweight, besides this, it can cause diabetics, and other heart problems. For example, the recent survey from Medical Associations in USA revealed that the 97% of obese young children are mainly due to bad food habits and only 3% was due to genetic reasons. Secondly, the electronic advancement such as television, mobile phones are another factor for children to gain excess weight as they don’t practice physical exercises regularly. Subsequently, this would result in poor academic results and cause serious mental problems.
To sum up, excessive consumption of junk food and lack of parent attention and physical activity are the causes of the increase in the incidence of obesity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28695652174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63480652402 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559420289855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7723563961 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178871975677 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670748453071 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508167359196 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107672635204 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502087227169 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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