You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Essay topics:

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to know the brief information about seminar which is held at California ,USA.

I am K V N Santhosh Sai , working as a mobile developer in Scotia bank. Few days back, I got an invitation to attend work-related seminar about Internet Of Things. I am so glad to get an opportunity to attend this seminar, because I am so passionate to learn Internet of things (IOT). Even ,I did some proof of concepts on this technology. I registered the seminar event yesterday, and submitted required documents passport , VISA copy etc.

I would like to know the date of the event and summary of the topics which you discuss. For you information, I am coming from Toronto,Canada and I am new to California . So , please suggest the hotels which located near the event.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,
Santhosh Sai

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bout seminar which is held at California ,USA. I am K V N Santhosh Sai , workin...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ifornia ,USA. I am K V N Santhosh Sai , working as a mobile developer in Scotia...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...te to learn Internet of things IOT. Even ,I did some proof of concepts on this tec...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd submitted required documents passport , VISA copy etc. I would like to know...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... required documents passport , VISA copy etc. I would like to know the date of...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Canada
...ou information, I am coming from Toronto,Canada and I am new to California . So , pleas...
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Suggestion: .
...oronto,Canada and I am new to California . So , please suggest the hotels which lo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o,Canada and I am new to California . So , please suggest the hotels which located...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78666666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89024507841 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1976495123 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2727272727 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162041693097 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549463806937 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436399695794 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936743236938 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285862607067 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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