Most people try to balance between their work and other parts of their lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the reasons for this and what can be done to solve this?
In modern society, there would be a wide range of professions and activities which cover the full time of a personal schedule. Some people argue that it is impossible to put their career and other aspects of their lives into an equilibrium. I will point out the reason and solution for this in the essay below.
In the first place, there do seem to be various reasons why a person is not able to equal works and other activities. Firstly, time management skill plays a crucial role in this circumstance. This means that a well-balanced schedule should be made and followed strictly. Moreover, a specific type of works also attached great importance to an equal life. For example, programmers must spend a lot of time on the computer to set up applications so that it is a real problem for them to create a balanced life.
In fact, it could be several solutions to tackle this heated argument. People can participate in essential skills courses which offer them numerous wonderful techniques to control routine activities. In addition, it is reasonable to have a picnic or spend time together with family and friends after hard-working in the company. Besides, reducing the number of works also exert a wholesome influence on maintaining a smooth pace of life in this crowded society.
In conclusion, a wonderful balance between career and other daily activities make a huge contribution to the success and happiness in life. From my perspective, it would be totally and utterly necessary to harmonize our life which makes the world a better place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...fessions and activities which cover the full time of a personal schedule. Some people arg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9053030303 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84801888113 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9526750208 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265174623004 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846049976591 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486171662242 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150357228462 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540763859764 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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