In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">It is true that many aged persons are living their resident accommodation and are live in old aged homes along with masses of similar age. Many a times state has to pay for the facilities provided in these centers. It is a debatable issue whether authorities has to bear this expense or its the responsibility of their offspring or family members. I assert that these expenses is to manage by the government because of numerous factors.

To begin with, each and every individual use to pay the tax during his working. In other words, everybody has shared portion hard earned money in the form of taxes. If state collect surcharge and tax on various things like property tax, income tax, surcharge and many more. So it is the moral responsibility of the ruling authorities to take proper care of the citizens want they become old and not able to earn on their own. Apart from this, some times young children consider old people as liability and are not willing to support their originators, due to which senior citizens are forced to live in poor conditions. Therefore, considering the contribution made by retired people during their working life and uncertainty of the youngster's behavior, it will better if government take the charge of proper care.

Moreover, their are many who do not have any child or family member to take care. It become extremely difficult for them to manage on their own. In adverse circumstances they suffer from depression, while living alone. It is the major duty of the government to keep its citizens happy than only nation will prosper and grow. Furthermore, if proper planning is done than budget for these expenses can be easily allocated, authorities can easily manage the cost of the old age homes. Hence, it is vital for state to look after the heath and have empathy for the people who are living alone.

In conclusion, trend of spending old age in special homes or care centers has increases. It is to taken care by the government that all the up to date facilities and good life style is provided by these centers with all the staff who take proper care of the aged persons.</span><br>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uthorities has to bear this expense or its the responsibility of their offspring o...
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...o begin with, each and every individual use to pay the tax during his working. In o...
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...the charge of proper care. Moreover, their are many who do not have any child or f...
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...child or family member to take care. It become extremely difficult for them to manage ...
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...e on their own. In adverse circumstances they suffer from depression, while livi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, in other words, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87331536388 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.888595127 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522911051213 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2022888091 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295744379498 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839493234557 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04455522345 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173466461692 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291522821353 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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