The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that stricter punishments will deter motorist from driving seriously or carelessly on the road. However, I strongly disagree that this is the best way to improve safety road, because there are alternative measures which would also be effective.
Stricter punishments will undoubtedly act as a deterrent, so that drivers will think twice before committing traffic offense. If the government implements a policy of zero tolerance, offenders will be fearful of paying for their crime. For example, heavy fines and the confiscation of driving licences are tough on crime, which force them to pay a great deal of money and have no right to using car. In addition, the full weight of the law must be imposed, banning wrongdoers from the roads so that they will no longer post a danger to other road-users. Those who driving while intoxicated should serve a prison sentence because sometimes they can endanger innocent lives.
While the efficiency of applying heavy punishments cannot be denied, there are other steps should be taken to improve road safety. Firstly, accident can be reduced by providing funding for transport infrastructure. For instance, broadening road which creates more lanes for drivers can help to avoid cars colliding. Secondly, the government should encourage citizens to take public transport which results in ease traffic flow to avoid accidents. For example, free bus and train passes can highly motivate people to use public transport.
In conclusion, it is true that stricter punishments on traffic offenses may contribute to the road safety. I believe that it is not the best solution to the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23106060606 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76470264103 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7956280515 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157625762561 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558888004595 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614986024995 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121922359552 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793399226067 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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