Nowadays, the fashion trend turned its path towards lavish or could name as costly marriages. Some people are planning their big day for the persona that they would like to project to the society as its a life time event. Certain people would like to show the bond and love between them to the society ,so that every person could maintain the same love with their life partner for the rest of their life. Marriages meant a lot of oaths, fidelity, as well as responsibility exchange, during the event the newly weds looks for more witness all through the rituals to encourage them. Last year survey on spending amount on marriages perplexed everyone that, most of them voiced their votes for trendy weddings.
On the other side of the hand, many claim that incurring lots of money on wedding is waste of ones time and effort. Because whatever the cost that involved in making the big event can directly transferred to the needy organizations or orphanages, as there are many people in our country suffering form different kinds of diseases some are lack of food and nutrition in them. Some other would like to maintain their marriage intimate because they are introvert persons.
In my opinion, marriages should be sweet and simple to cherish rest of our life. We should become a role models for our future generations to spend less amount on marriages, and allocating certain amount for donations in the name of wedding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...would like to project to the society as its a life time event. Certain people would...
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Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...like to project to the society as its a life time event. Certain people would like to sho...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ond and love between them to the society ,so that every person could maintain the ...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...ings. On the other side of the hand, many claim that incurring lots of money on wedding...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ng lots of money on wedding is waste of ones time and effort. Because whatever the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82448979592 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39760396848 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2961012164 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104708105373 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453697298575 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488467621188 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736758752332 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425477630704 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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