Although sport has participated in various aspects of human daily lives, some people consider it as just an activity for recreation. In my opinion, everyone have their own arguments that are fit for specific individuals and I would like to analysis this issue in more detail.
On the one hand, sport plays a crucial role to people earning money from it. For example, not only professional athletes attach their lives to sport but also young people who have a great passion and enthusiasm for it. Furthermore, positive effects toward health problems such as diabetes, heart attack, obese brought by playing sport are cannot be abandoned. Continuously playing sport is proved to be beneficial for health through blood cycle enhancement, respiratory ability improvement and digestive system stimulation.
On the other hand, according to a group of people, especially the young, sport is nothing but a kind of entertainment. In other words, they have a plenty of habits, one of which is playing sport. It means that sport do not has significant involvement in their routines. However, based on wonderful benefits sport creating for community, there will be a moment that they realize how much they need to exercise when their body become exhausted.
Last but not least, the majority of people do not have adequate recognition and appreciation about the essential role of playing sport to community, so sport is supposed to be a leisure-time activity. Therefore, in order to create a sustainable development, people must change their thoughts and spend more time on playing sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23137254902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88046089695 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0251196214 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218215627288 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844307503272 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048864511238 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133173360534 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277189803142 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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