Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? (Reported 2017
Twenty-first century is an era of technology where science has made a lot of advancement and making our lives quiet comfortable and convenient. A lot of manual works which were quiet laborious has now become like a piece of cake because of all the technological help. Though there are a few who feel that this has led to the problem of sedentary lifestyle and health issues but personally I do believe that the negatives far outweigh the positives that it offers, which is further elaborated.
Thanks to the wonders of technology that our life today has become so easy. Earlier it used to take almost the whole day to manage the household work specially for ladies, who, in a patriarchal society like ours are supposed to manage the household but with the help of machines they have become liberated and can move out of homes, work and follow their dreams and likings. Thus through machine's help our works have become less laborious, saving a lot of time and giving us the opportunity to do our destined and desirous work.
The proponents contradicting the above view argue that it has led to a sedentary lifestyle in individuals. Earlier people used to do by hand the household chores that used to keep them fit and active but today it is not the case and machines have made people quiet laid-back and it has lead to an increase in the diseases like obesity and heart diseases but as it is said a bad workman blames his tools in a similar it is like blaming machines for our wrong lifestyle.
Thus, to conclude It would not be wrong to say that the benefits of machines are numerous, it is just we need to judiciously adjust to the changing trend so that we could enjoy the maximum benefits and not let it be shadowed by controversies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61414790997 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64391206087 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536977491961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5133507648 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.444444444 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775086756198 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275288145108 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266878851508 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486912064646 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211535236947 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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