More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Obesity is becoming a pressing concern specially with the youth of today. With changed lifestyle and fast paced living people want to have everything instantly and hence increasing the dependence on fast foods which are usually very fattening. There are a few people who concur to the view that by escalating the price of fatty foods the issue of obesity could be solved but in my view it couldn't be the only solution and the above point is further elaborated below.
Though increasing the cost of a product to reduce its consumption seems a good and a genuine solution on paper but actually it has failed to solve the purpose like it is seen in case of cigarets where when the price was even increased by 100% it's consumption reduced by only 5%. Thus, just increasing the prices of fatty products cannot provide the ultimate solution.
There is a great need that apart from the above measure other policies should even be implemented and put forward. Generating awareness among individuals on the harms of consuming fattening foods can be a step forward. They should be made aware of healthier alternatives that are plausibly less fattening like replacing full cream milk with skimmed milk, consuming whole wheat bread over white bread etc.
So it can be said that a single measure of heightening price cannot be the sole solution to the above issue. Along with it we need to incorporate other solutions like generating alternatives, creating awareness etc. which can help in solving this menace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, so, thus, apart from, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93307086614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60654006071 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5351148332 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133357592225 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050171213455 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034649777664 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765370115192 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389690330977 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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