More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?
Globalization and advancement in the technology have modified the structure of today's society. There is no doubt that many countries have benefitted by these developmental changes. One such noticeble change is the food habits among individuals, especially the younger generation. Readily available food is gaining its popularity over freshly cooked home food. This development is good or bad for health is a question of debate.
In today's era, most of the people live a mechanical life; from home to work and work to home. Majority of these working professionals work for long hours and do not get time to look after themselves. In such a scenario, ready-made food is the best option, as it is easily available and is hassle free. Additionally, this food also looks appealing as well as tempting for the consumers, because of the food color and added preservatives. There is no preparation involved for consuming ready-made food, whereas cooking food requires other tasks like chopping and blending.
However, even ready-made food that seems to be so appealing has some disadvantages. Most of the vendors or the restaurants use harmful preservatives to store their food for longer duration which is bad for human health. Furthermore, the obesity rates are increasing rapidly, due to the consumption of such food items. Freshly cooked food have nutrients in them, that are very essential for our health and body.
To summarize, ready-made food is undoubtedly an easy option for many of the working professionals, but it is at the cause of their health. An individual must be aware of the harmful effects of such food and try to reduce its intake.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...very essential for our health and body. To summarize, ready-made food is undoubt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13703703704 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99198976327 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1385866072 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311222672263 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104427550194 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694322274908 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193598856423 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386338750663 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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