Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Two types of people in our society, one is interested to study only the course which he likes in university, other says that to study course that is useful for the science and technology and its prospective growth.
Firstly we will discuss the students who love to study their own chosen subject. These type of people study only which is interested to them and why they study because they think university education can get them brighter future and off course if one is going to study the subject of his own interest, it will allow him to boost his horizon. This will make him passionate about specific area, In other words, he will be more connected to it. To add, their interest shows he wants to do something phenomenal in that field which no one ever does.
Meanwhile, people who think only the subjects which are needed for the emerging future technologies wants to run themselves in terms of competing with the world. That type wants to upgrade them with technological powers. They have perception that higher studies must be about science and technology that is important for the future and the world needed them.
Afterwards, both opinions, I would say by selecting favorite subject will be influential regarding he will be more passionate and inclined to it. They can do innovations because of his high interest. For example, if a student looks forward for his career, So in that case he wants to study an area which he desires and waited for long, he will must show his skills for that subject. In result, that will give him successful career. Moreover, one is not a good university student or bright resource if you are interested in one area and enrolled in another one, that is wrong. In fact, it is not possible at all for the progressive career, too. That totally depict as you are pressurizing or enforcing your brain to do something which you don't want to do. As a result people gets fail in their lives for not having good career. Sometimes they become depressed.
Therefore, it is obvious that there are two types of people exist, one has to chose their self interested course, Alternatively another kind looks for future technological subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s horizon. This will make him passionate about specific area, In other words, he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78723404255 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57002429913 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502659574468 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3639466675 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254233671878 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813544671967 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692199518299 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151137589796 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712618174045 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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