Leisure time is a basic requirement for every people in the world. In our modern day to day to life, spending leisure time has become the main entertainment medium for people around the world. However, who should we spend our leisure period with requires a discussion.
We must acknowledge that we spend most of our times at workplaces. People we engage in our day to day life is the people from those workplaces only. So, it will very much easier to make a friendship with the people at work. As all the earlier friends from schools or universities are scattered in different geolocations, the only viable option is to spend leisure time with co-workers cum friend nowadays.
Nevertheless, most of the time co-worker's have their own agenda on how to behave. This type of articulated behavior is not healthy for any sort of relationship. In our leisure period, we would like to free ourselves from all the boundaries provided in our workplaces. So, articulated behavior will not help us to enjoy.
In addition, we spend most of the weekdays in workplaces. Sometimes we stay far away from families. Also, sometimes our work is so hectic that it becomes tough to maintain work and private life balance. So, in our leisure period, we should spend more time with our families rather than friends from workplaces.
In conclusion, although friendship is a mandatory requirement for the human being I think, friends from workplaces should be less preferred over the family members. Vacations should be dedicated to family members only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day to'.
Suggestion: day to
...very people in the world. In our modern day to day to life, spending leisure time has become ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00389105058 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81040000641 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5433313666 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6470588235 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200922748309 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665652812847 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045554552076 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109295483102 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500236389211 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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