some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place o learn this, Discus both views and give your opinion.
parents are the first teacher of any child. everything a child learns foremost is from parents and then from teachers. it is often argued that responsibilities of a citizen are taught by parents or by teachers. I think both of them are equally responsible for educating a child making them good member of the society.
Firstly, we will discuss about role of parents in nurturing their offsprings to contributing member of the community. parents are the one who stays with the child all the time, they need to watch behaviours of their children and should teach good manners and portrait them good member of society. For instance, respecting elders, loving juniors, etc are taught at home.
Moreover, many people believe that child should learn their responsibilities from their school and its reasons are listed below. In school, there will be an opportunity to meet new people. Although students learn basic things from their parents they will understand significance of all parental teaching from their teachers. For example, school can conduct awareness campaign, cleanliness programs to educate about their role.
According to me, a person should grasp knowledge from elsewhere possible and apply them practically in their life. he or she can learn from parents, friends, teachers, neighbours but most important is he need to know its application in being responsible member of the society. For instance, a child learns to respect elders from parents and from school he can learn stress management technique.
To conclude, both school and parents should play a crucial role to mould a child. although parents are first teachers, school should need to teach what it needs to.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-31 | Varsha stha | 56 | view |
- Governments make many rules to protect people from danger for example by making people wear seat belts in cars or not allowing smoking in public places However many people believe that there are too many rules nowadays To what extent do you agree with thi 41
- The following maps show the changes that have taken placed in the centre of a town since 1700 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 70
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak 67
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the silk worm and stages in the production of silk cloth 56
- The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
parents are the first teacher of any chi...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
parents are the first teacher of any child. eve...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everything
...nts are the first teacher of any child. everything a child learns foremost is from parents...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...is from parents and then from teachers. it is often argued that responsibilities o...
^^
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
...o contributing member of the community. parents are the one who stays with the child al...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l be an opportunity to meet new people. Although students learn basic things from their ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...rograms to educate about their role. According to me, a person should grasp knowledge from e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...d apply them practically in their life. he or she can learn from parents, friends,...
^^
Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stress'
Suggestion: to stress
...om parents and from school he can learn stress management technique. To conclude, b...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...d play a crucial role to mould a child. although parents are first teachers, school shou...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23897058824 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72529154261 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9673396722 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239829054097 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869544412787 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051947848585 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150122202163 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207491478391 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.