Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in the free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem ?
It is undeniable that fitness level of people in our society is declining these days. Some employees are unable to spare time for workout neither on weekdays nor on weekends because of their hectic work schedule which raises many health issues. However, government should restrict employers to include fitness gym in offices to extirpate these health concerns.
Today, we are living in a fast paced world and there is scarcity of leisure time for oneself. In other words, people are extremely busy in making money to meet their basic need so they start doing odd jobs to increase their living standards, consequently leads to physical problems due to negligence towards health. For instance, in 2018, World health organization reveals that obesity among people all over the world is augmenting instantly due to lack of exercise routine. Furthermore, obesity eventually cause many fatal diseases like cardiovascular arrest and diabetes.
However, there are many effective solutions to overcome said matter. One way to tackle this, government should take some initiatives to improve health condition of nation. Law had better be imposed that companies and offices must include health and fitness gym in their premises and allow worker 30 min daily to do some exercise and an instructor to teach them how to do proper exercise. One similar example in China where companies spare worker to get some nap or do some exercise to restore energy level which results in efficient working and great output is achieved.
In conclusion, undoubtedly routine chores had made man like a robot leaving no time for exercise serves as a major cause of health issues. While, this could be overcome by ensuring the presence of gym with instructor in the working premises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18245614035 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59752468764 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624561403509 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8308162407 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26001262949 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761435453284 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388151343007 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142683084763 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204708621374 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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