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Inventors are not as important to society as doctors.
To what extent do you agree with this statement.
Nowadays, most of people admit that doctors are useful people to check up the patients and to give the medicine for them. On the other hand, they do not know that there are also inventors discovering the illness and the medicine. The inventors have given the influences for the society before appearance of doctors.
First of all, we give thanks to the investors who had discovered the illness and medicine in the past time. They had researched the benefit and disadvantages of them. We can see the example which was vitamin A discovered by Mc. Collumn in 1980s. Last time, most of societies did no...
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