The given maps illustrate the changes which have taken place in town centre since 1700 to 2019.
On the west of town centre, there was Steggle farm which is now turned into Steggle road with traffic lights on either side. The river and bridge remained unchanged for decades. There were only few shops, large fields and only less houses in 1700 in southern part but now there are many houses and shops however, no fields. The middle part of town centre is more or less same as compared to in 1700. The only change is additional building of hotel. Moreover, in northern part of town centre, Goode farm has benn converted into car park with lots of houses. On the right of market street more houses are built than before a decades along with blocks of flats. When we see opposite of flat blocks, supermarket can be observed where there used to be fields long back ago.
To sum up, much changes are not seen in western and central part of town centre. However, many changes have occured in east, north and south of centre of town in comparison to 1700.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun houses is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e only few shops, large fields and only less houses in 1700 in southern part but now...
^^^^
Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decade' or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: a decade; decades
...treet more houses are built than before a decades along with blocks of flats. When we see...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...to be fields long back ago. To sum up, much changes are not seen in western and cen...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, more or less, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50261780105 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02301659557 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6629656657 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1818181818 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219755655393 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890021711786 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113996270733 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224762013918 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124460024868 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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