Significant economic growth is targeted as a main goal to achieve high standard of living by overwhelming majority of countries; however, it is also argued by many that economic development leads to the loss of social values. I believe that the drawbacks of economic enhancement are eclipsed by its benefits. In this essay, I a going to shed some light on the advantages and disadvantages of economic growth.
It is certainly true that a significant number of countries have improved people’s living condition by providing enhanced standard of public services: health and advance public transportation system. Governments with good economic conditions could have initiated more social welfare projects to support people to afford astronomical fees that charged by hospitals. For example, dramatic increase in the oil prices pawed the way for my country to help additional 10000 people under the social healthcare project in 2013. Furthermore, advancements in public transportation system would lead to decline in the level of traffic jams which in turn results in important rise in the life of satisfaction of people.
However, high economic growth might have a negative effect on society by conducing losses of values. It is undeniable truth that economic development should be obtained through sustainable sources which in turn don’t lead to catastrophic results, such as pollution. For example, by considering environmental issues negligible, my government launched two huge technology parks simultaneously in 2012, so that the recent research publicized by the environmentalists revealed the truth that owing to the operations of the plants, the city of these technology parks would be threatful for living due to polluted weather which should be preserved for posterity for next generations.
Having weighed up the pros and cons, it can be concluded that the disadvantages are overshadowed by benefits leading to different opportunities in health and transportation.
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- University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59933774834 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27980592115 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.101495068 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.727272727 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19492371906 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820171676299 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617352000854 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112327371439 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955156750297 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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