Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Wildlife is the integral part of food chain and thus controls the ecological environment. While some people feel that species that are endangered by hunting done by humans should be saved, most are of the opinion that every endangered whether, animal or bird, should be saved regardless of the cause that is pushing the species to its extinction.
Chief reason for my view is animals are unique and beautiful creature that cease to exist in the same world as humans. Every animal has its specific property. For instance, Tiger belongs to cat family and is more fearless creature in its group. Not only he attacks the animal to be stomachful but also for its pride, seen to have a fight with elephant which is five times the size of the Tiger. Unfortunately, they are at the very of extinction due to excessive hunting done by humans in the past and hence are termed endangered. Infact there are lesser amount of zoo in asia that still have tigers on display to public. Once extent, we can no longer see the fearless animal with beautiful yellow strips all over his body, might be a loos that cannot be sustained. However, the wildlife protection are creating awareness regarding save tiger project all over the world so that the hunting can be stopped indefinitely. Thus, it is important for us to save the endangered species.
Another reason for my view is that there are other species who are not endangered by humans are endangered by natural causes. We are aware of Polar beers living in north pole in arctic region. Since there is a melting of ice at the polar region the living space is getting narrower for them. They also rely on ice build up on ocean to migrate from one island to another in search of food but due to Global warming they are not able to migrate, are forced to eat the fauna of its native island but after depletion of their resources they are force to die in harsh conditions. This is also applicable to penguins which in addition to this suffering, are also not able to take participation in mating season as they are not able to migrate from another island. So, in accordance to these situation humans, being considered brainy and as the residents of this world, should create awareness in order to save the endangered species regardless of its extinction causes.
Some might argue that world society should consider saving only those species that are potentially at the verge of extinction by the result of human activities as the one without can not be saved due to environmental conditions. But, human society can not be emotionless on the loss of a whole species and with the help of several advancement in technology and wild life association they are certain steps that can be taken to save them.
In conclusion, for all the reasons states above it is clear that humans as the citizen fo the earth should save every endangered species whether it is impact from the human activaties of by the natural causes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2439.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71760154739 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52721235755 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477756286267 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 797.4 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.863499011 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.95 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.85 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279549031548 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812134913855 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112205295131 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190784199986 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961314625356 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.