In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
Two days ago, I read an article about housing in Karaganda city. The author said many house seekers choose renting accommodation more frequently than buying. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of leasing an apartment.
Let us start with the positive effects. The main benefit of renting is the affordability for families, which have low incomes. Renting houses costs much less than paying a mortgage, so many couples resort to renting, but at the same time they deposit a small portion of the family income. For example, many families, in Karaganda city, both rent two-bedroom apartments for a hundred dollars and deposit the rest of the salary to a savings account. Another advantage is the ability to relocate to other cities. Even thought many families are often offered a dream job, they have to refuse it, as the workplace is a long distance from their permanent place of residence. In this case, renting allows them to pursue their career in another company, no matter its location. The final advantage is that renovation of housing is not necessary. Families, who prefer renting, can choose another apartment when the old one needs repairing.
Despite these advantages, renting causes many drawbacks. One of the main disadvantages is the discomfort of sharing an apartment with other people. As many cities are overcrowded, many families have to share accommodation with others, which causes inconvenience to all. For instance, many couples, in Almaty city, have to rent three-bedroom apartments with other two families. Another drawback is the frequent change of schools for children. Children often suffer from having to change schools when their parents decide to lease a house in another part of the city or country. As a result, this leads to the absence of friends as well as poor performance at school. The last disadvantage is low confidence in the future. People, who have to live in a leased house, feel less secure than house owners, since they are factually homeless.
In conclusion, although renting often allows families to easily change their residence, it may cause discomfort and stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to rent'.
Suggestion: to rent
...e author said many house seekers choose renting accommodation more frequently than buyi...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ample, many families, in Karaganda city, both rent two-bedroom apartments for a h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15850144092 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71810636625 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5734870317 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8197246276 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148058885682 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452906643098 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384057826993 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958374272784 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332286834102 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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