Undoubtedly, Health is one major factor which determines the individuals longevity and it has to be taken good care of. It is deemed by many people that schools doesn’t furnish adequate information to the children about the benefits of the health. I certainly concur with the statement as i firmly believe that the guidance provided at schools, regarding the significance of health ,can make great impacts in the children's life.
Firstly, Schools plays an utmost vital role in every child’s development. In this modern era, there is a rate race almost in every sector, so as the education field. Management started giving more stress on their academics to just not to ensure their students to get good score or excel in the academics for their glorious future, but,also, to showcase their organization’s competent, compared to the other institutions. As a consequence, there is less focus shown towards the health perspective activities such as sports classes and health sessions. To exemplify , according to the survey done by a famous Educational trust XX , it is shown that there are several schools in the country grab the assigned sports classes to complete their academics schedule.
On the other hand, By Providing adequate guidance at schools about health, keep the children away from several prevailing diseases. People nowadays are facing innumerable health related problems especially children by not following a strict health regime, such as eating food at irregular timings, consuming junk food and most importantly failing on performing the basic physical activities. For example,according to the reports published by a famous magazine ‘Times’, it is stated that more than 19% of the children are affected with hazardous problems such as Obesity and other dreadful diseases, because of the poor attention given to the health perspective. Hence, by educating children with the best practices for maintaining a healthy life, would enable them to go a long way in their life and achieve fruitful results in every aspect.
To conclude, Schools should be wise enough to incorporate several health related activities in to the academic schedule in order to furnish children a great hassle free life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...s one major factor which determines the individuals longevity and it has to be taken good c...
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Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ls, regarding the significance of health ,can make great impacts in the childrens ...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , also
...academics for their glorious future, but,also, to showcase their organization's ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lasses and health sessions. To exemplify , according to the survey done by a famou...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ey done by a famous Educational trust XX , it is shown that there are several scho...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , according
...e basic physical activities. For example,according to the reports published by a famous ma...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...ls should be wise enough to incorporate several health related activities in to the academic s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, as to, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38176638177 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04008376824 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586894586895 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7799764558 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.307692308 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125672235516 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473654287323 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035977842005 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795638519607 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116421951817 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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