We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we cannot trust journalists. What do you think? What qualities do you think a successful journalist should have?
news can give a great deal of knowledge, however, certain people believe that journalist cannot be trusted. I believe that most of the journalists are not truthful and mostly cook-up fake news or and spice to the information to make it sensational. A meritorious newsmen always follows ethics, avoids fake information and tries his best to investigate the data that he gets.
Nowadays we do not see an honest newsperson as very one involved in this industry is interested in generating money and not providing truth to the public. For example, in a study conducted by indian school of journalism found out that almost 80% of the newspapers in India are directly or indirectly attached to political parties. Hence such unfair practise will lead to one-sided information and propaganda than the reality.
A good media person is ethical, fair, avoids misinformation and analyse this publications before presenting it to the masses. he should gather his information from credible sources such as government and the authorities. taking opinion from unnecessary people and conducting media trail on simple issues can lead to immense physiological trauma to their victims so it is wise not to indulge in such activities. A fair newsmaker will follow all that above.
In conclusion, we can get great amounts of knowledge from news but there is always a great doubt about its authenticity due to dis-trust on newsmakers. I frankly believe that it is very hard to see a true and faithful newsmen. To be a good media personal it take a large amounts of commitment and loyality to this profession.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, frankly, hence, however, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06463878327 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96680298221 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4601139344 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133111183731 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396376913315 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051997231072 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739827664969 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246619577515 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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