People sleep less than before in many countries.
Why do people sleep less?
What effect does it have on an individually and on society?
It is thought by some that in many countries around the world people have more sleepless hours than in the past. Nowadays people have hectic pace of life as a result they do not have enough time to sleep and this trend has negative effects to people’s health and to whole society.
According to recent research, people have to work nowadays more than in the past as a result people have hectic pace of life. With the development of our society, people have very heavy workload and they usually have to work overtime and sometimes on the weekends. Furthermore, the population in urban areas is growing and people have to live far from business centers and they have to travel big distances in order to get to their jobs. As a result, people’s stress level is increasing and people have sleepless nights or they just do not have enough time to sleep.
When people have many sleepless nights, their mental health and physical health become poor. The consequences of poor health is that people will suffer from different diseases and will not be able to work as the average human. Furthermore people with poor health will not be able to have families as they will spend all their time and money to treatment. As a result when people do not have families and have health problems the demographic level is decreasing. This development will have adverse consequences for whole society in future. For example, some developed European countries suffer from a lack of workforce as its demographic level is very low.
In conclusion, as people have to work overtime and travel long distances to get to their destination they do not have enough time to sleep as a result the average standard of health is becoming lower due to this development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... adverse consequences for whole society in future. For example, some developed European c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80398671096 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57259152838 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435215946844 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0408378501 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280152423853 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130586838902 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072863153709 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212222321155 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065230573358 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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