It is unevitable that more than half of the population in this world under the burden of stress and this is alarming dilemma in enormous countries nowadays. Here,in this essay I will elaborate the root causes of this menace as well as try to give fruitful remedies to cure and prevent from it.
To commence with, the basic reason for having stress, first and foremost it is a competitive era so people have low salaries and extra work load which is the prominent source to having stress. Moreover,due to work stress lack of bonding big family members escalated. As a result, depression reaches on its acme. Apart from this, people are living in a fake world where likes and comments on social media are reason of their happiness but when they do not get any attention from social media and people then they get under stress. On the top of this, different factors affects people with various age groups like students are under stress of studies, adults are in seek of attention and jobs as well as for senior citizen ignorance is the major cause of stress.
The solutions can be suggested for this obstacle, that people or to be concentrate on their work rather than having anxiety about its repacursion. Furthermore, yoga and meditation is best source to get relief from stress and it also assist to have a healthy body and sound mind. In addition to this, people should stay away from negativity and think about positive things which will boost mind and stress will go away. Subsequently, if people are suffering from stress and depression they should concern with doctors. Besides this, always try to be elated and share obstacles and hurdles of life with family and friends whichwhat is the best way to get victory over stress.
To conclude from above confabulation, it is axiomatic that stress is like a floor which is widespread all over the world and affects people. Therefore people should stay positive and contented to overcome from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as for, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81845238095 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46229898923 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7044682868 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214412820268 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785822502897 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520032519553 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136697578618 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449947211163 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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