Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Practicing the same activities and refraining to do something new are preferred by numerous people. Others, nevertheless, think that one of the good things in life is to alter our previous habit. This essay will explain both points of view.
As an endeavour to do similar routine and to refrain new experiences, some people consider that it is better for staying at their comfort zone rather than changing it to a new one. There are two reasons of this argument. Those people, firstly, feel afraid to face a bad experience which possibly happens if they do a new thing. Secondly, all of them are too enjoying their current activity which is, in the end, making them merely to stay at their position.
Nonetheless, the other people would rather do a new experience instead of practicing the same routine. These people also have their own reasons. They, first and foremost, have an enormous curiosity about new things. Second but not less crucial, these people are too fascinated to go and feel new experiences and conditions. They, last but not least, basically want to go out of their comfort zone because they used to learn something from this activity. Therefore, they determined to try something that they have never done.
By way of conclusion, I do appreciate the opposing view which preferred to keep the same routines. Nevertheless, in my perspective, an endeavour to go out of comfort zone is the best decision for every person who wants to find the real personality of themselves because all of us are going to find countless precious things by doing it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89138576779 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7112638676 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9685741958 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217542672518 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695004032372 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593181717734 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137749319329 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487615339779 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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