Technology allows us to have a useful and interesting life than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of the positive impacts of information technology in human life have sparked a heated debate. Some people argue, that these improvements have negative impacts for the enviornment, but, I am inclined to believe that, the advantages of the technology outweigh the disadvantages. Thus, I will anayse this claim throughout the below essay.
In general standpoint, in the past, people had to visit a movie theatre to watch a movie and a gaming arcade to play a computer game. they had to use petrol cars for their daily travel. Many things were done manually, since the world lacked automated processes. Ultimately, lack of having technology wasted so much energy of the earth. this resulted in global warming as well as increased the green house gas emission.
In contrast, with the latest developments of information technology, now people can watch movies and play video games at their houses. this brings the whole family together. In addition to that it has reduced the cost and increased the peace in home. Not only that, but also, more developed cars which operate from battery or solar power contribute to the enviornment by reducing energy waste. As such, the development of the technology has brought nothing but positive returns to the world.
To conclude, eventhough there are number of compelling arguments to both sides, it is apparent that positive impacts of technology have outweigh the negative impacts. Therefore, we should be thankful to technology developers for the immense survice they have done.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in contrast, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24497991968 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77797873501 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642570281124 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4662379399 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0666666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131128059128 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404628424149 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442022049068 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813026817806 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390001245245 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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