personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The important effect of personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career was always debetable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of personal growth is more powerful human career has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on personal growth is always benifical in future growth on recent year. It can be agreede that personal growth helps the person to become intelligient and brilliant.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why personal development is important in future professional growth but the most conscipious one steam's from the fact that personal development is the key of human professional development it helps to make a person sucessful in the society. As an illustration, a current study shows in America 2 student of CQ university they belongs from high class family they become prime minister and minister at once on 2015. In addition, professional development plays vital role in people lifes person who have a good personal outlook can bring many good changes in the country. Thus, person should focous more in personal lifestyel first so they can be sucessful in future.
Another key of justification for upholding this notion is that personal development helps to get good education and good job in a country. For instance, for example if a person have a good professional lifestyel and intelligent they can easily get scholarship, free education, free accomodation, free plane tickets for abroad visit etc. Thus, people should give more attention in their personal development.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of personal growth is really benificial for people to upgrate their professional life is prominent and person should be motivated to grow thier own personal growth by family, society, teachers and friends ect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ofessional development and advancing in ones career was always debetable has now bec...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...America 2 student of CQ university they belongs from high class family they become prim...
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Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ifestyel first so they can be sucessful in future. Another key of justification for up...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93667577505 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518394648829 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3663967046 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.272727273 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303873377427 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132149626103 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112953263258 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192974709137 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553907445819 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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