Some people believe that the sole aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss.
The important effect of some people believe that the sole aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substaintial influence of higher education helps to get a good job has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on higher education is benificial to be good employe. In my opinion, it can be agreed that geting higher education helps to be a best employer.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why people believe that higher education makes a man ready for employment but the most conspicious one stem's from the fact that higher education plays vital role in our life which helps to be a famous employer. As an illustration, higher education brings a drastic change in humans life for example, a recent study shows that if a person got a doctoral degree then he will get a good job in any famous hospital with good salary. In addition, higher education helps the person to be smart and intelligent. Thus, a person with higher education helps to develop his professional and socio cultural development.
Another key of justification for upholding this notion is that higher education is important to be great employee but the most alaraming one is rooted in the fact that higher education makes a man perfect employee and it will increase ideas, thoughts of people. For instance, by geting higher study in polticies a Ram yadav become a prime minister of nepal in 2017.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of higher education is prominent and it helps to upgrade the knowledge, experience to the employee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 449, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...hat geting higher education helps to be a best employer. At the outset, there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90425531915 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73993257611 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507092198582 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.812730231 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.3 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314364354712 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136270236907 0.0925447433944 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103001494473 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195083661139 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799367326326 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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