There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local Councillor. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain what the problem is
tell the Councillor what you would like to be done
Dear Sir,
I am jack martin and live in-house no. 125/A street no. 3. Me and all the other residents of this street are facing a huge problem with the main road that passes through just in front of my house. Actually this road was constructed only six months ago after the community protested against the government. The condition that was thought to be better has started getting worse in the couple of days after the seasonal rain. The ditches and small pits can easily be seen everywhere. these are causing road accidents everyday even the pebbles that got out from these ditches have scattered all around and cause tyre punctures.
Now the thing that is to be noted is this that this street is located in the lower region where usually rain water accumulates and the bitumen road does not sustain in such conditions. therefore, I urge you to get a concrete road established in place of current charcoal road.
looking forward to your positive response.
yours sincerely
jack martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80116959064 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38744077735 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.266279414 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140431943743 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526243891964 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484652463541 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920147652659 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264682299366 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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