In this highly turbulent and erupting era, we have witnessed enormous problems on a global scale. To count some, they are the threat of nuclear war, cybercrimes, and global warming. According to me, global warming is the most severe issues, if not dealt with utter care, will be proved to be detrimental for the inhabitant of the planet.
To begin with, since the past decade due to mammoth urbanization and industrial expansion, the world has undergone massive deforestation. Moreover, emission from fossil fuels and toxic chemicals gases from factories have increased the level of air pollution significantly. For instance, in major cities, the effect of greenhouse gases is recorded at an extreme level that not only it is difficult to breathe for humans, but also have impacted birds and animals at large.
To eradicate this pressing pandemic all sections of communities from governments, organizations and individuals will have to collaborate cognitively and holistically. For example, the government should impose stricter environmental laws on companies responsible for polluting the planet. Furthermore, an organization should invent and innovate products pertaining to the source of green and renewable energy like wind and solar power. Finally, the citizen should avoid using plastic made from toxic chemical compositions.
In conclusion, from the above example, it is evident that for protecting the environment for future generations and species, radical measures are required by all sections of the society.
- The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to developing countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- You are given climate change as the field of study Which area will you prefer Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study 93
- Should marketing for consumer goods companies like clothing and food focus on reputation or short term strategies like discount and special offers and in what ways this can impact reputation why 84
- In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinions and give examples. 61
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to the various problem. Whose responsibility is to solve these problems government, a private organization, or individuals? And what measures can be taken? (If choose individual). 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...r war, cybercrimes, and global warming. According to me, global warming is the most severe issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60344827586 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05098130449 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668103448276 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5090275262 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19486508929 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628291616308 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639225492907 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107164391645 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236525395406 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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