Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Wilderness area in their natural state is very rare resource available in any nation. The prompt said that ”Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in the natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain” I totally agree with the prompt mainly for two reasons.
To begin with, remaining widerness areas are the homes of the several species, and those species are important part of the food cycle. As we all know, all the species are somehow interlinked to each other, and maintain balance in the food cycle. Therefore, wilderness area play an important part in maintaining the balance. simplest example is of rats, which are consumed by cats, and cats are consumed by dogs. If any of the links are disturbed or disconnect, then one of the species will be in surplus and disturb the balance of food chain. Therefore, proper law should be passed to maintain the balance. If in any case nation failed to implement the laws, then the food chain will be disconnected and will have severe consequences on the nature.
In addition to above, wilderness area contains very fruitful Ayurveda resources and prevents or mollify the disaster like tsunami or cyclones. Further, these are also help in reducing the global warming impact Global warming is becoming very serious concern these days as environment is on the rise over the years. For example, areas with more green field or plants generally have good atmosphere, less pollution, good health condition of public rather than areas where plants or Greenland are less. Therefore, a good law to prevent the remaining wilderness in their natural state is necessary to maintain global warming, to check pollution or ,more importantly, to get ayurvedic resources. If the law on the protection is not implemented, then it might lead to an overall increase in the temperature of the nation. Depletion or extension of natural resources.
However, Few people might say that economic growth is most important for the nation. But, global warming, depletion of natural resources, balance of food chain, protection of humanity from disaster is also important aspect of today’s world. Therefore, a efficacy law to protect the wilderness should be implemented as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30628272251 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81635022014 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434554973822 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4762320798 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.611111111 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548891629793 0.243740707755 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19062796277 0.0831039109588 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17134749016 0.0758088955206 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.391614980172 0.150359130593 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20264230701 0.0667264976115 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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