The given table illustrates the information about the amount of miles travelled by different types of travelling.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that despite the fact, that with years there were some improvements in transporting system,car remain the most popular transport type .
First of all, there were noticeable changes in proportion of distance travelled by car, local bus, long distance bus and taxi. While distance travelled by car, taxi and long distance bus increased 1.5, 2 and 3 times, respectively miles driven by local bus decreased.
In 15 years, car, long distance bus, train, taxi and other modes of travel had an upward trend by contrasts and local bus had downward trend. Despite the fact that there were various changes, some modes remained approximately the same: walking, bicycle in number of miles.
All in all, miles travelled by all modes till the end of period raised by almost 2000 miles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , car
...some improvements in transporting system,car remain the most popular transport type ...
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Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r remain the most popular transport type . First of all, there were noticeable ch...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'trended'.
Suggestion: trended
...by contrasts and local bus had downward trend. Despite the fact that there were vario...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05970149254 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54500236484 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3364425696 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769795586509 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041516259593 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261417475882 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484309317749 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205795162028 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.