In many of the democratic countries there is a continuous debate about the arguments linked with the economic growth some people believe that it is just a dilution harnessed by the government while on the contrary other thinks that it is an essential part for developing the economy. I partially agree to the affirmation that economic growth is both an illusion and is vital for any nation at the same time.
In the context of the first notion, talking about the positive impacts of economic growth, many nations such as China and India are depending on their governments to govern a development in terms of economic uplift. Economic growth is vital for any nation. Governments of the democratic countries are progressing a lot economically all Thanks to globalization with the advent of globalization economy of many nation is at par.
On the flip side, when people of certain nations cannot see any development in terms of basic facilities they tend to believe that governments are making fool out of them and all these king of practices should be abandoned immediately. This often happen when ground level work is at the minimal level and people especially of rural areas are living the life of misery.
Hence aforementioned, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that economic growths has its own set of pre-requisites and measures and it depend on the individual opinion if these practices needs to be shun or entertained.
- Some people believe that academic subjects such as chemistry, physics, and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking. 85
- 137) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 60
- The importance of travel seems to be over rated, brilliant scholars used to lock themselves at home. Travel is important for education, to what extend do you agree or disagree? 88
- Should heritage buildings be preserved? Discuss your views. 55
- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...h, many nations such as China and India are depending on their governments to govern a develo...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many nations'.
Suggestion: many nations
... the advent of globalization economy of many nation is at par. On the flip side, when pe...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...areas are living the life of misery. Hence aforementioned, the foregoing discussio...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'propound'
Suggestion: propound
...entioned, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that economic growths has i...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...t of pre-requisites and measures and it depend on the individual opinion if these prac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, while, such as, talking about, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02074688797 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92279400837 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3475246685 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.25 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286881002081 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119121827455 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073631391494 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154428191375 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786715176862 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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