new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas at first has or have free choice to select where to work

Teachers and doctors are the building blocks of any society. Any society is a huge failure without the qualified teachers and doctors. In my opinion it should be made mandatory for any teachers or doctors to work in rural areas before choosing the job of their preferences and choices.

Rural areas children's often lacks the preliminary education and basic availability of medical assistance which is a shameful fact, one of the reason behind this is the non availability of qualified teachers and doctors. And it is an undeniable fact that nothing much is done in this realm. There are still many places around the world where children's are illiterate and suffers from myriad numbers of medical diseases. In this regards, I would suggest that government should set up a rules for teachers and doctors to work in rural areas during their internship time, this will mutually benefit the children's of the village places and teachers or doctors will work with a wide range of problems and difficulties to polish their skills.

When doctors and teachers work for poor people they will truly understand the value of humanity and additionally this will provide them the wide scope to explore options.

It could be concluded that both the professions are important for development of rural areas and hence it is vital to incorporate these professions to work for poor and young generation of our society.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03862660944 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66672499583 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536480686695 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.055536035 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.444444444 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281082766553 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109495903913 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814023679948 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164513593671 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537409510392 0.0609392437508 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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