With the advent in the medical technology average life expectancy has increased significantly. We are governing a phenomenon where the proportion of older people is rising as compared to the younger population. This phenomenon has both the negative and positive influence on our society.
In the context of the first notion, medical science is growing phenomenology we now have cure to almost all the dreadful diseases such as Cancer, Typhoid, many neurological diseases. With increase access to medical cures and medicines the average life of humans has increased dramatically and we now see more older people than ever before. This in contrast is causing the rise in population. As population is increasing there is a scarcity of basic commodities such as food and land. Also, inflation rate is uplifting making everything expensive and less attainable.
Earlier, average life expectancy is only around 40 years many people die because of natural disasters and pandemic diseases and hence, the balance of human versus the natural resources are maintained by nature itself. With the increase in the population and older age people the balance of nature is lost and almost,many of the resources available on the earth is already consumed by human's.
Hence aforementioned, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that medical technology is a blessing as well as curse to human beings. We need to keep this phenomenon in proper ration to stop damaging our natures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'cured'.
Suggestion: cured
...ce is growing phenomenology we now have cure to almost all the dreadful diseases suc...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
...s increased dramatically and we now see more older people than ever before. This in contra...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...the balance of nature is lost and almost,many of the resources available on the earth...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...earth is already consumed by humans. Hence aforementioned, the foregoing discussio...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'propound'
Suggestion: propound
...entioned, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that medical technology is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, well, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28813559322 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93482297015 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4946686242 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161262990401 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567340675233 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511073921422 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929467344095 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048129230841 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.