Some People Think That Exercise Is The Key To Health While Others Feel That Having A Balanced Diet Is More Important
Discuss both views and give opinion.
Fitness is an important factor in one’s life. Few people believe regular workout is vital for a healthy life, whereas other few believe a good balanced diet is more imperative. This essay will discuss both of views. In my opinion both are equally important for a healthy life.
Maintaining our fitness level is imperative today, because we go through rigorous work-related stress and unhealthy eating habits. when a person does regular workout, it helps him in reducing the level of stress. For example, a recent survey shows that people who indulge in exercise have a better overall fitness level when compared to someone of same age who does not work out. In recent past, there were many news that many youngsters below the age of 40 died due to heart attack. In fact, it was found that all who died let an unhealthy and stressful life without any exercise.
Diet and exercise go hand in hand. Although, exercise can transform an individual to a fitter person, but having a balanced diet also plays a vital role. Many youngsters today are found obese and the main contributor to this is fast food. Since it is easily accessible and cheap, people feed on them without knowing the unhealthy side of it. For instance, a burger from KFC contains 800 calories that is equal to 20 idly and one must run around 10 kilometres to burn the calories that he had consumed from the burger. In order to support healthy lifestyle foods such as fruit, vegetable and nuts must be consumed which is regarded as balanced meal.
To conclude, daily exercise along with balanced diet is essential for a long healthy life. Health related problems such as high blood pressure, sugar and tension can be controlled by doing regular workout.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...ot work out. In recent past, there were many news that many youngsters below the age of 4...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82828282828 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45610375775 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2876007276 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3529411765 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160295764425 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482527891345 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513903416047 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972284489548 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400656542817 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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