A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you did there and what the food was like.
Dear Jay,
Wow! It has been long time since last we wrote. Hope your family is well and things are going your way. I am delighted to know that you have planned to go for holiday and have asked me to recommend for destination. Well I think Manali is worth visiting and I have been there and it is an amazing place.
In May 2014 I visited Manali along with my wife for honeymoon trip. I loved the trip for several reasons. I stayed in Blue Radisson hotel. Its five-star hotel and their tourism department arranged everything for us. It is really very luxurious hotel with plethora of amenities including swimming pool. We have visited Rohtang Pass at height of 300mtr from Ground level and it was an awesome experience because of the snowfall. We also enjoyed Paragliding which is in Sollang Valley. As Manali is known for its mouth-watering north Indian dishes, we tried eating all varieties of Parathas which were really delicious and this menu is available in almost all the restaurants in Manali. In simple words, Manali is the best place for a holiday.
It was a memorable trip for me and I would recommend this destination to everyone. I am sure that you will enjoy and please write to me if you need any further details.
Best Regards,
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mming pool. We have visited Rohtang Pass at height of 300mtr from Ground level an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66517857143 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50954412251 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9250458155 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3125 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222851527424 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639771964242 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891629413171 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176918859716 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906158861069 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.