Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
The value of Internet depends on how people use it. With the progressively developing of internet economy, many things are springing one after another, even problems inevitably occur, however, as I said before, which should not be blamed to Internet. It can't be ignored that the Internet has made the most significant progress with our society, by providing plentiful valuable information.
First, Internet are making life more convenience, by collecting large amounts of information around the world to change the Earth to a village. Take traveling as an example, which is the most frequent idea when modern city dweller want to relax and have fun. When planning a travel, we search the price of a flight ticket and book the lowest one on the net. There are also a lot of information on the net for the tourists from which they can get to know the most interesting place and the most delicious food. Even travelers can know much about the hotel before they arrive. In another word, as long as we have enough distinguishing skills, the most useful information will eventually come out, which bring convenience and efficiency life. So as far as I'm concerned, this is the most helpful aspect.
Besides, Internet provides us more opportunities of education, which benefits to plenty of people all over the world. People can take online educational courses, learning whatever they want to learn, no matter they are young or old. For instance, my little nephew has been interested in coding for several months. The last time I saw him in video call, he was learning coding via an application in her mother's phone, which surprised me a lot. Since he is so young, maybe only five years old. They told me that there were a lot of educational products on the net which concentrate on the market of early children like him. In my opinion, there's no doubt that Internet provides an obviously useful method, which make people get closer to their dreams.
Finally, there are also many academic materials, which are so helpful that we don't need to look over hundreds of books to complete an essay. Researching turns to be more quickly and more high-quality at the same time. Every time I have some topic to research, I will open my computer first, and then access to the Internet. Google is the best friend, as well as Wikipedia. Of course, I can also find some public papers on the net, as important basis which I can refer to. Now, I feel that I would know nothing without the Internet. For this reason, I think it supports so valuable academic materials that benefits not only me but also the all researchers.
Concerning all the details mentioned above, it is rational to believe that Internet plays an important role in broaden our horizon and deepen our mind, with the a great deal of information and services.
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- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ch should not be blamed to Internet. It cant be ignored that the Internet has made t...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...ch should not be blamed to Internet. It cant be ignored that the Internet has made t...
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Line 3, column 754, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ience and efficiency life. So as far as Im concerned, this is the most helpful asp...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
... saw him in video call, he was learning coding via an application in her mothers phone...
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Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...early children like him. In my opinion, theres no doubt that Internet provides an obvi...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...materials, which are so helpful that we dont need to look over hundreds of books to ...
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Line 7, column 657, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t only me but also the all researchers. Concerning all the details mentioned abo...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...n our horizon and deepen our mind, with the a great deal of information and services....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, i think, no doubt, of course, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80412371134 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62250210118 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562886597938 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7246813914 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.12 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23209110844 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560253277542 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494604158865 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123113158136 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531225953638 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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