In your opinion, why is the circus still a popular form of entertainment in the modern electronic age? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In this current technology-developed period, there are various way for entertainment and relaxation. Circus in my point of view, which was a popular form of entertainment is no longer regarded as an ideal and relaxing amusement on account of some reasons below.
First and foremost, as the significant development of science, humans are enabled to put down their pressure and find out their pressure and find out their pleasure by many ways today. Many services and smart devices have been invented assisting people to have a healthy body in physical and mental condition. In this meantime, they do not need to go out for searching amusement. They just take a seat at their warm homes and enjoying human's invention. Therefore, circus is not a best choice for spectators anymore.
Moreover, circus is now seen as an inhuman form of entertainment that threatens not only performers but animals as well. For a successful performances, they have to practice day after day at high-level pressure. Besides, to serving audiences, their slapstick need to be astonishing, surprising and dangerous. That can lead to unsafe situations. Additionally, animals which are chosen to perform necessitate be trained in a long time and must suffer various hurts in body and mind.
In conclusion, I believe that circus is not embraced by spectators much more than that in the past. We should discourage this form of entertainment because of our safe and animals' health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ans invention. Therefore, circus is not a best choice for spectators anymore. ...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'performance'?
Suggestion: performance
...s but animals as well. For a successful performances, they have to practice day after day at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16455696203 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09509130162 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2465818134 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0758051580438 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255096025696 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358414152569 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552109194167 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037098590031 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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